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CONSIGNE: Two students are talking about the confinement period.One is convinced it was better to have school at home whereas the other prefers going to school to study. Write the dialogue (using agreement, disagreement and opinion). About 200 words.

devoir:
-Hi, how are you ?
-Hi, yes it's been a long time!
-Yes, how is it going through your confinement, did you like it?
-Yes, my confinement is going well, I liked it because I was more comfortable at home, the organization was easier and it was quieter than in class. I also like the fact that I don't travel anymore because the bus trip was really tiring and long. During the breaks I didn't see my friends but I could play games or watch series. I was able to choose my pace of work, I worked less than in class but I managed to work, to concentrate and to have my certificate with distinction. And you did you like your confinement.
-No, I didn't like the confinement because I couldn't see my friends anymore, there were sometimes connection problems, I didn't like the videoconference meetings, I didn't always understand the exercises or lesson that I was given, we could not do sport and being at home did not make me want to work but rather to play, my average to drop during confinement which demotivated me. However, I managed to get my patent without mention.
-I do not agree with you concerning the sport, we could not move for several months we have all put on weight, the sport allows us to be in shape. I totally agree about the videoconference meetings it was really tiring here is no doubt about it that.
- I do not agree with you concerning the organization at home, the organization in class is much better, if we do not understand an exercise we can ask the teacher to explain it to us better. On the subject of transport and the pace of work I totally agree with you the bus, train, tram are really tiring and I could start later.
-There is no doubt about it the confinement was difficult but I was able to adapt.