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Since the creation of the United States, there has been a lot of racial inequality going on throughout the country which has caused many demonstrations among the country, from the mid-60s with Martin Luther king’s speech which has led to many demonstrations to nowadays with George Floyd's death. But the main problem here is that now the demonstrations are becoming more and more violent even at the point that they are turning into a riot. The reason for that is that over the years the situation hasn’t changed that much after all. There is still a large percentage of black people that are stuck in poor neighborhoods with very tough living conditions, and who are still victims of discrimination and police brutality, by the way, most of the officer who has committed brutality and has abused of there power on black people were often protected by the police unions. Here we could then ask ourselves what should we do when the all system is against us, the growing frustration of black people is completely understandable. So that could explain the anger of the black community which probably think that there voices and complaints or dismiss. That results in more violence in the hope that someone will be listening to what they have to say. But unfortunately, demonstrations like that just generates more hatred and discredit to the main cause, and because the purpose of the demonstration is to hide behind the violence the columnist are against it because they don’t see the real purpose of it. Black leaders across the country condemning the vandalism in their city because of that, so that the purpose of the protests can be understood.
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Since the creation of the United state, there have been a lot of racial inequality going on through the country which have caused many demonstrations among the country, from the mid-60s with Martin Luther king’s speech which have led to many demonstrations to nowadays with George Floyd’s death.
But the main problem here is that now the demonstrations are becoming more and more violent even at the point that they are turning into a riot.
The reason for that is that over the years the situation hasn’t changed that much after all. There are still a large percentage of black people that are stuck in poor neighborhoods with very tough living conditions, and who are still victims of discrimination and police brutality by the way most of the officers who have committed brutality and have abused of their power on black people were often being protected by the police unions.
Here we could then ask ourselves what should we do when the all system is against us, the growing frustration of black people is completely understandable.
So that could explain the anger of the black community which probably think that their voices and complain or dismiss.
So that results in more violence in the hope that someone will listen to what they have to say.
But unfortunately demonstrations like that just generates more hatred and discredit to the main cause, and because the purpose of the demonstration is to hide behind the violence the columnist is against it, because they don’t see the real purpose of it.
Black leader across the country condemning the vandalism in their city because of that, so that the purpose of the protests can be understood. Bonne soirée
Since the creation of the United state, there have been a lot of racial inequality going on through the country which have caused many demonstrations among the country, from the mid-60s with Martin Luther king’s speech which have led to many demonstrations to nowadays with George Floyd’s death.
But the main problem here is that now the demonstrations are becoming more and more violent even at the point that they are turning into a riot.
The reason for that is that over the years the situation hasn’t changed that much after all. There are still a large percentage of black people that are stuck in poor neighborhoods with very tough living conditions, and who are still victims of discrimination and police brutality by the way most of the officers who have committed brutality and have abused of their power on black people were often being protected by the police unions.
Here we could then ask ourselves what should we do when the all system is against us, the growing frustration of black people is completely understandable.
So that could explain the anger of the black community which probably think that their voices and complain or dismiss.
So that results in more violence in the hope that someone will listen to what they have to say.
But unfortunately demonstrations like that just generates more hatred and discredit to the main cause, and because the purpose of the demonstration is to hide behind the violence the columnist is against it, because they don’t see the real purpose of it.
Black leader across the country condemning the vandalism in their city because of that, so that the purpose of the protests can be understood. Bonne soirée
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