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This picture is a painting made by Norman Rockwell in 1943, this painting is called "Freedom from Want".

The first picture has very simple and light colors. It looks like it was painted in the 19s because of the shape and form of their hairstyles.
In the backround there is a white curtain and on the right is half of a frame .
The man standing has grey hair and he is dressed in a black suit, a black tie and a white . The woman serving food has gray hair, she wears a tunic as well as a white apron.In front of the image is a golden plate of fruits.

On the right are four people and on the left are four people.

It seems that a family with many members is having a thanksgiving dinner in the first picture.

The children and the grandchildren are waiting for their grandmother to come with the food and the turkey. They are seated in a big dining table. Everyone seems so excited for this delicious feast, there faces are beaming with excitement. The pictures describes a sweet family gathering.



The second picture has very bright colors and seems to be
painted recently due to the change of tradition and habits.
In the background is a white curtain and the wall is colored green .

On the right are three people and on the left are four people.

The second picture also describes a family gathering however this family has a different way of doing some things. Instead of having a turkey, they ordered fast food. They have unhealthy beverages and meals on the table. This family is also beaming of excitement waiting for their delicious unhealthy meal. This is a very modern family. The woman serving food has gray hair, she wears a tunic as well as a white apron.The man standing has gray hair. He put a tank top as well as a bandana around his head.
Also because of the way they wear the hats and the type of fastfood.
Conclusion:

The difference between the 2 images is that the first image is more traditional and simple. They look well educated eat healthy foods. They also wear modest and simple clothes. It looks like a family from the 19s.
However the 2nd image looks modernized. They eat fast food that did not exist years ago. They also wear more modern clothes, not very modest and look like gangsters.

Merci d'avance


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Réponse :

Bonsoir, dans la 6ème lignes "shape" et "form" veulent dire forme en français . Donc ça va donner "en raison de la forme et de la forme". Aussi je ne sais si ça viens de ton texte mais à la 12ème ligne il y a juste white avec un point.

Personnellement je mettrais plutôt à la place de À droite il y a 4 personnes et à gauche il y a quatre personnes . Tu ferais mieux de mettre "There are 4 people to the right and left of the room" mais après c'est toi qui vois.

Pareil pour 3personnes à droite et 3 personnes à gauche.

Sinon c'est un bon exposé avec des mots riches et variés