Bonjour tous le monde j’ai besoin d’aide en anglais est-ce que quelqu’un peux m’aide s’il vous plaît merci d’avance

Bonjour,
We turn away and walk towards the school. All of a sudden we begin to feel slightly uncomfortable. There is something not quite right about the shop being closed. Even Thwaites is unable to offer a reasonable explanation. We become silent. There is a faint scent of danger in the air now. Each one of us catches a whiff of it. Alarm bells are beginning to ring faintly in out ears.
Voila j'espère que jai pu t'aider :)