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Bonjour j'ai un texte à faire en anglais sur une dystopia pouvez vous m'aider à le corriger merci d'avance :)
The natural events due to global warming have all changed. We are in 2100 and the world is at its lowest point. The Earth is coming to an end, everything is deserted. It all started in 2020, a year full of misfortune. Several terrorist attacks had been recorded: London, Reading, Birmingham, Gelsenkirchen, Conflans saint Honorine, Nice and so on. The covid-19 pandemic, which was so small, compared to the diseases that surround us today, had ended up bringing down impoverished governments. Trump, who at that time was not yet dead, had gained full power and allied himself with North Korea, creating a tyranny that had brought many countries to their feet. Tensions led to a war between the US and China, resulting in World War III. During this atrocious battle many nuclear bombs were deployed: France, USA, China, Russia and North Korea. Years later, diseases released from these devices disfigured people and destroyed them from within. Some people went mad; we called them psychotrops because their behaviour was terrifying. Governments withdrew in response to the outbursts. Today, the richest people have gone to bases designed by the Naza 20 light years ago, while the poor, the sick and the elderly are here; in a ravaged world where people have to fight to have something to live on. I am 87 years old; I live in a forest away from this uncontrollable world, waiting for my death so that I can live in peace and harmony with my husband in paradise.


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Tout a l'air bon, juste la dernière phrase "so that I can" est à reformuler :)

Réponse:

Ça à l'air bon ! Pense à la majuscule à "Conflans-Saint-Honorine". Par contre, qu'as-tu voulu dire par "psychotrops" ? Je ne suis pas sûre que ce mot existe, sauf erreur de ma part ;)

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