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Victoire man was born on May, 8 the 1995 in London. He is an american
superherob by many powers. When he has 3 years old he got these powers
because he drinking a potion. He has 2 powers: he can go everywhere very
fast to help people in danger. Then he can be invisible and killed the vilains.
Ulick man is victoireman's enemy. Ulickman transform the people into
animal. He became a vilain person because he when he was a children we
laughed at him so he decided to take his revenge.
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YINGKEGO

Bonsoir,

Tout d'habord je dois avouer que je ne connais pas qui est victoire man, mais victoire en anglais est 《victory》(au cas ou je laisse )

Victoire man was born on May, the 8th of 1995 (ou alors on the 8th May 1995) in London. He was an american superherob with (pas by puisque ce n'est pas un outil ) many powers. When he had (passé) 3 years old, he got these powers because he droke a potion. He had two powers: he could go everywhere very fast to help people in difficult(j'ai changé car je crois bien qu'en anglais danger n'existe pas). Then he could be invisible and killed the vilains.

Ulick man was victoireman's enemy. Ulickman transformed the people into animals. He became a bad (pour éviter la répetition) person because when he was a child, people laughted at him so he decided to take his revenge.

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