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Dear Sir or Madam,

Your advertisement in 'The Time news'

for the advertisementposition as a teacher sparked my interest.



Please find the details of my advertisementapplication for the position

in the enclosed advertisementresume and let me briefly explain how I can contribute to your department.



With over 15 years of advertisementexperience in teaching English and French in Paris, Norwich and Inverness,

I believe my qualifications would match your advertisementrequirements.

In my advertisementcurrent position I manage a team whose main purpose is to find the best way to teach different languages to young pupils.

My advertisementsuperiors and the students' parents have recognized that I have found an easy method which develops my students' skills.



I would advertisementdefine myself as serious and dynamic,

I am able to advertisementrelate well to people and believe it is time for me to move to a university like yours in order to pursue my teaching career and to bring my best to your students.



If you are advertisementinterested or if you have any questions

I am advertisementavailable

for a recruitment advertisementinterview.

I thank you for taking the time to advertisementconsider my resume and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully.

Lucas Braigny


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Dear Sir or Madam,

Your advertisement in 'The Time news'

For the advertisement position as a teacher sparked my interest. 



Please find the details of my advertisement application for the position

in the enclosed advertisement resume and let me briefly explain how I can contribute to your department. 



With over 15 years of advertisement experience in teaching English and French in Paris, Norwich and Inverness,

I believe my qualifications would match your advertisement requirements.

In my advertisement current position I manage a team whose main purpose is to find the best way to teach different languages to young pupils.

My advertisement superiors and the students' parents have recognized that I have found an easy method which develops my students' skills.



I would advertisement define myself as serious and dynamic,

I am able to advertisement relate well to people and believe it is time for me to move to a university like yours in order to pursue my teaching career and to bring my best to your students.
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