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Writing exercise 22
I must go back to earth, I must see my family. In the Space, I am alone, I can’t talk with a human. I love the space, and I love my work, but to be alone all time, it’s hard.
When I went on a mission a few years ago, I didn't think about all that, my duty was to save humanity but once in heaven, I am terribly bored. I have to find a way to get back to earth as quickly as possible. I am trapped in space, the government forces me
Writing exercise 23
I have served my country for decades. I have been recognized worldwide as the hero of the planet, not the one in the movies, but the real superhero of the planet. I have been able to remain anonymous all my life, no one has ever recognized me in the street without my famous mask. I am 60 years old now, I am not capable of anything anymore, and I am in my house, my old house. I watch television all day and I am proud that I am
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Tu as oublié à plusieurs reprises de mettre les "I" en majuscule. Ligne 2, il faudrait rajouter un "the" à "all time". "I can't bear to be in space all these more years" = I won't bear to stay any longer. "...find another identity and invent my fake death" = ...find another identity and fake my death.
"... the people I will fight against will win against me easily" = ... the people I would fight would win against me easily.
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