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Bonjour,
Quelqu’un pourrait me dire si mes phrases sont correctement rédigées ? « Look at me! I have also moved to NYC at her age and all is going great for me, moreover I was no one there waiting for me. All was new and I had nobody yet I was able to adjust to this completely different life without any problems and I had nobody to depend but Arnold who has a wife waiting for him with a promising future together! »

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Look at me! I have also moved to NYC a her age and everything is good for me, even if there was no one waiting for me. Everything was new and I was alone, yet I was able to discover this new life on my own even if I had nobody to depend with, nor like Arnold, he married with a wife who's waiting for him. I'm sure they're gonna have a beautiful future together !

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