Bonsoir, pouvez vous me corriger en anglais s'il vous plait et y apporter si besoin des connecteurs logique ? merci de votre aide

For the morning I suggest you first admire London from the London Eye you can admire many tourist sites like Big Ben, and St Paul's Cathedral.
After this, walk along the banks of the Thames to join the SEA LIFE London Aquarium, where there is an important collection of marine life.
For lunch, head by bus, metro or on foot to St Paul's Cathedral. You will find there several cafes, restaurants in order to eat like a British.
As for the afternoons, for the bravest there is the London Dungeon which is an attraction offering an experience with scary rides on the history of London.
If you are rather celebrities go to visit the muser of Madame Tussauds who offers many wax figures.
End your day with dinner overlooking the Tower Bridge. If you want to stay on French cuisine go to the restaurant Le Pont de la Tour. Whereas if you want high quality British cuisine go to L'Oxo Tower Restaurant & Brasserie.