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BONJOUR, VOUS POUVEZ ME DIRE SI IL Y A DES FAUTES. MERCI BEAUCOUP


*Female genital mutilation was prohibited in Sudan.
Mutilations are several procedures involving removing parts of the female genital system and mutilating the sexual organs of young women who are practicing for non-medical reasons.
Since July 2020, excision which is often traditional became a crime and punished up to 3 years in prison.
This is a great advance in human rights in this country because 9 out of 10 women are excisted.

*Personally, I have managed to take toxic people out of my life.
When I stayed with them I was no longer myself and without realizing it I had become a toxic person like them.
Now I feel much better.
So this is one of the best news.


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coucou :)

Il faut que tu corriges juste ça :

- women are excised

et de mettre une virgule et un point pour marquer les temps de pauses pour ces 2 phrases suivantes :

- Since July 2020, excision, which

- realizing it. I had

sinon le reste c'est bon ;)

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