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Bonsoir, je suis une élève de terminale et je souhaiterais votre aide pour m'assurer de la syntaxe de mon oral qui a pour sujet une athlète des invictus games, on est censée être des journalistes qui présente un(e) athlète, merci pour vos réponses
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Hey Welcome to the BBC

we are a journalist at the BBC and we are currently at the Invictus Games Australie 2018.

The athletes are arriving and we notice our favourite athlete Elizabeth Marks

She is an athlete who makes swimming breaststroke history at only 30 years old she has won a gold medal at the 2015 World Military Games and four gold medals at the 2016 Invictus Games.

Let's not forget she joined the army during her deployment to Iraq in 2010, she suffered bilateral hip injuries that left her disabled in July 2008.

It's true, that's why she has a tattoo on her leg.

In 2012 Elizabeth is the first Paralympic swimmer in the U.S. Army's World Class Athlete Program, which gives injured soldiers the opportunity to train full-time in competitive sports.

In 2014, during the Invictus Games, she contracted a severe respiratory infection and the doctors at Papworth Hospital put her in a coma for a month.

She asked Prince Harry, who presented her with her gold medals, if he could present one of his awards to the doctors and nurses at Papworth Hospital who had saved her life.

She is a courageous athlete who has been through a lot and continues to fight to succeed.

Let her prepare here, see you soon

BYEE

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Bonsoir. Je ne sais pas si tu es la seule à faire ce devoir ou si vous êtes en groupe , si tu est toute seule
Good evening , we are/ i am (ton nom) , BBC Journalist and currently at the Invictus Game 2018.
The athletes are arriving and I am/we are noticing our favorite athlete Elizabeth Marks : she made history at only 30 years old as she won a gold medal at the 2015’s World Military Games and four gold medals at the 2016’s Invictus Games.
Let’s not forget that she joined the army during her deployment in Iraq in 2010 and suffers from a bilateral hip injury that left her disabled in July 2008 which is why she has a tattoo on her leg.

In 2012 , Marks became the first Paralympic swimmer in the US Army’s World Class Althlete program which gives injured soldiers an opportunity to train full time in competitive sports.

In 2014, during the Invictus Games , she unfortunately contracted a severe respiratory infection which put her in a coma for a month in Papworth Hospital. She asked Prince Harry who presented her and her gold medals if he could give of her awards to the doctors as a gift for saving her life.
She is a brave and courageous athlete who has been through a lot and continues to fight to succeed.

Let her prepare here , see you soon. Thank you very much.
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