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bonjour vous pouvez m'aider svp ,merci

je doit inventer ou raconter, un souvenir pour l'anglais j'ai ecrit un texte et j'aimerai que vous me disiez si il est correcte:

When I was a little girl and I haven seven years old

i was loving make dangerous activty when my mother don't look at me so one day I was deciding to jumping three steps from my stairs then I jumping from five stairs I was missing to falling but that no stop me I was very not sure but i

made that and i make a very bad falling

My mother heard me falling so she's coming for check who i fell and feel very bad

she took me at the hospital and they told me my peg are broken

Moral

that is not very serious, but I must do more attention !


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